Conrad Rice

Hi gyrfalcon! I decided to drop in and give your story a friendly review, mostly because you were kind enough to drop in with my story the other day. :) ...

Hi christy! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be reviewing your story today. So, this was a rather nice story. I found it a little hard to get into, but once ...

This is a nice little tidbit. I do like the imagery in it quite a bit. Yet, unfortunately, that's all this is, a tidbit. Consider expanding on it. Any time ...

Hi there! I've dropped by to give you a hand with this story, since you did the same with me yesterday. :) This seems to be a well put together ...

So, Jack, since you were so charitable and gave my story a review, I thought I would drop in and return the favor, no matter how poor my critiquing skills ...

Well, this was a rather interesting piece. I did like how you told a story using poetry. It was a very good story too, well worded and paced and whatnot. ...

Hi Hannah! :) I have to say that I really loved this poem. It all flowed together so nice and was very beautiful to read. I could see the theme/idea ...

Hi Angel! It's been a while since I've seen anything new by you! I'm eager to get into this. :) So, despite the brevity and the rather limited scope of ...

Hi lakegirls! I always like reading your stories. They're so delightful. :) And this story, it seems, is no exception. I like the three characters that you have here and ...

Hi bueberry! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'm dropping in to give you some help with this story! :) This is a well put together little piece of work. I see ...

Hi georgia30! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'm dropping in to give you a hand with this piece. The rain pooled in the cracks between the uneven cobblestones... like tears the ...

Hi Lil_Pau! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'm dropping in to give you a little hand with this prologue. As a prologue, I believe that this works very well. I found ...

Here I am Kylan, with my review of part 8! :) I didn't see anything remarkable about the first part of this. Unless this character and his guilt are going ...

Hi Ky! I just got back from vacation, so I decided to do this before I forgot. :P This was a good section here. I'm afraid I had a peek ...

Well, Kylan, I have to say that this was an interesting portion and that I liked it. The first section with the Pastor was rather well done. I thought that ...